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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
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Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-07 07:14 PM



The novelty of the humour
The laughs that only we could understand
It’s a code in its own right
But still the smile is true to the world
Even if you cry inside
You never fell in my eyes
You have always been strength
An amazing personality
With no fears or harsh faults
No matter what anybody can say
You will shine
For they are mistaken
Because they never knew you
And they do not deserve the right
Every Minute you become more
Deeper in thought
Your eyes mirror your smile
For the true content of the world
Never conform to whatever anybody may say
For you couldn’t be better if you tried.

Rosie Mitchell

© Copyright 2002 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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1 posted 2002-12-07 07:36 PM


I enjoy this. A nice tribute to a friend. My best friend and I laugh ourselves silly. Sometimes, just the tone in our voices will cause us to go off. But we're infectious, causing those around us merriment as well.

This sounds like one of those kind of friends. What a blessing and joy for you.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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2 posted 2002-12-07 07:44 PM


I truly wish the two of you the kind of love I had with a friend of mine, and judging from your poem you might just have it   she is going to treasure this.


         
Season's Greetings from Canada eh!

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-07-2002 07:45 PM).]

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