You Are There, Here With Me..(LadyInWhite Challenge)

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-12-07 01:26 PM

You are there, here with me
hearts so close, forever to be
Thoughts are here, there with you
in my mind's eye, a clear view
Apart by distance, together in love
sent to each other, by wings from above
Though you are there, far away
You're here with me, always to stay
I hear your voice here, from afar
with love from there, where you are
From the wind, whispering clear
bringing you from there, with me near
Stars in sky, up above me
are where you are, for you to see
So my dear Love, just look around
me with you, will be found
Though away from me, far apart
together are we, close in heart
So, look around, if we will do
you'll see me, I'll see you
As you are there, here with me
with love as ours, this will always be

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-07-2002 04:24 PM).]

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-07 01:30 PM

Ever the romantic, lovely words as always

raph

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-07 01:33 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love how you joined into this year-old challenge! I wrote a poem for this last year and will re-post it eventually, you wrote the challenge so well, yay, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful nheart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-07 01:50 PM

Raph, yes, I am a hopeless romantic. Reckon it could be because I'm so much in love with my Love?
Oh, and thank you for your reply, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-07-2002 01:51 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-12-07 01:53 PM

Beautifully penned Ethel!
Challenge very well met!
Enjoyed the read so very much.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-07 01:54 PM

Noah, thank you for reading and replying. BTW, Lady In White reposted her poem, "A Duet With Muse", the other day and asked everyone to meet her challenge again.
Why don't you repost your poem now?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-12-07 01:56 PM

Thank you, Nancy Lee. It makes me feel so humble when all of you talented poets tell me that you enjoyed reading my poems. I really do feel so small among all of you great writers. I really appreciate the encouragement of all of you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2002-12-07 03:03 PM

That was a truly beautiful piece. It would be extremly hard to pick a favorite line, but I really liked "Apart by distance, together in love." You have such talent, never stop using it.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2002-12-07 04:09 PM

Beuatiful Ethel!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-12-07 04:25 PM

Stephanie, thank you sery much for your sweet reply. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-12-07 04:26 PM

Sue, I appreciate you reading my poem. I'm glad, too, that you enjoyed it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-07-2002 04:27 PM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2002-12-07 04:48 PM

Beautiful sentiment, wonderfully rhymed and finely crafted.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2002-12-07 04:49 PM

You sure met that challenge with style - beautiful poem Ethel.

Seasons Greetings from Canada eh!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2002-12-07 06:15 PM

Kethry,
Thank you so much for your sweet reply. I'm glad that you like it.

Sharon,
I appreciate your nice comments. Thank you for reading my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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