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Open Poetry #23

Inside me

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2002-12-06 09:46 AM

I miss you more than you know
Each time I think of you I glow
A smile across my face it creeps
Inside my chest my heart it leaps
I find myself in frozen stare
Each time in my minds eye your there
Day dreaming off into space
A picture of your beautiful face
Your lips I want to kiss so much
Your body I want to hug and touch
A cheesy grin I do wear
Each time my mind takes me there
Hotness spreads over me
As of me inside you be

[This message has been edited by whiskey (12-06-2002 09:52 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-06 09:49 AM

well that should melt some snow..and if not at least warm a heart...

nicely done...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-12-06 09:51 AM

whiskey
Well that's a warm cheery drink, enjoyed.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-06 09:54 AM

Definitely warming; enjoyed.
Isn't love grand?

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-06-2002 10:56 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-12-06 10:21 AM

You expressed the ache of missing someone very much with vividness. Well done. Enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-06-2002 10:22 AM).]

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