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You are There, Here with Me....Lady in White's Challange repost

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Martie
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You are There, Here with me

Once upon a time is ever
Minutes unticking dawning stayed
In my vision all the oceans
Wading footsteps start cascade.

Across a prairie torched in sundown
Drinking lips of rivers free
Peaceful following of a heartbeat
You are there, here with me

In the mirror of reflection
Scruff kneed climbing up a tree
Popping bubbles of reminder
You are there, here with me

Could my inkwell touch creation
Pierce the truth of always love
You would be the one with answer
Gleaned from sky climbed search above

So I wait here in the stillness
Opening all my depth of be
With joy to find what I was knowing
You are there, here with me.
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12-01
© Copyright 2002 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-05-2002 06:22 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

this was a wonderful challenge...
and a lovely poem

*s
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Superbly done Martiegirl...very beautiful..
Well done lady!!
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So beautifully and gently penned sweet poetess.
Challenge well met!
~Hugs~

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Martie,
Your style is up to any challenge.
Beautiful
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Martie,

This is beautiful. I especially love the last stanza.

Hugs and love, Pat



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I love it when you rhyme.   This is so pretty, Martie. *hugs*

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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(smiles) This is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, I remember this challenge and sometime soon I will post my response too, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Martie - you write such lovely poetry - I just thoroughly enjoy reading it and going where you take us with your owrds - Paul
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Lady will love the fact that this has been reposted, Martie...I just know it!  I know I am!
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Here, there, or in-between, friendship is a perpetual celebration of our yesterdays, and the spirit that helps us find our tomorrows.

This poem feels especially good to me today, because it carries the promise and the reality.

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And it feels even more delightful
to me this evening...
because a warm hand held my heart
all day.

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