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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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0 posted 2002-12-05 04:01 PM



Trail along
A blossom here
Wind along
Another there

Petal soft
And fragile fair
Are special moments
That we share

Climb along
This fence and gate
Sing a song
Oh patient wait

Weave a pattern
On life's quilt
Of  love and strength
Of absent guilt

We creep along
So intertwined
Upon the blossoms
Of lifetime

Trail along~
When time is through
Have you done
All you can do?


~Sunkissed


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2002-12-05 04:19 PM




nice, sweet and light

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Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-12-05 09:34 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, such sunshine always fills your words, I wish this warmth to always glimmer deep in your soul around the prirose path to your dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Rainbowdust
Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2002-12-05 09:56 PM


I liked this one; your message came across fluently and smoothly... and I'm sure it'll make people think!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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