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kayjay
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0 posted 2002-12-05 02:47 PM


Iambic is a fretful pattern true;
But ne’er say ne’er is what we need to do.
For if we write with all our heart and soul,
We trust that we shall seek and find our goal

So thank you for your lifting words to us
Who toil and strain with words that make us cuss.
The reasons why we strain to reach our peak
Is only that we need the joy we seek


© Copyright 2002 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-05 02:52 PM


darn if I don't hate straining for joy *s

glad you posted this..mine was to be blank verse so I couldn't rhyme like I wanted to.
M

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2 posted 2002-12-05 04:50 PM


Very well done Ken...
Myself..I can't rhyme much at all...
and do prefer therefore to ramble on in free verse.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

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3 posted 2002-12-05 08:51 PM


LOL! I question the moronic but not the iambic...it's flawless.
kayjay
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4 posted 2002-12-05 09:18 PM


To N and B and always present E
I thank you for the gift you give to me
I want to let my words ring true and free
and sometimes pattern po'try is the key

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2002-12-05 09:21 PM




(smiles) Oh Ken, this is excellent, sweet friend, I couldn't agree with you more and always love to write in free verse as rhyming is a beauty but to express yourself honestly is more important! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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