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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2002-12-05 12:39 PM


To express
in the minamalist
what is only
expresable
truly in
great depth
poetically

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

© Copyright 2002 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-12-05 01:47 PM


YES!!!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-12-05 02:00 PM


I totally agree....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

VAS
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3 posted 2002-12-05 02:01 PM


Wit and Wisdom here!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
4 posted 2002-12-05 07:28 PM


Less
Is more
(Or less)
More or less...


I like your definition, Walter.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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5 posted 2002-12-05 08:41 PM




(smiles) Oh Paul, this is wonderful and so very true, sweet friend, to say a lot in so few is indeed a remarkable talent! (big huggsgssssss) I love the feel of this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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