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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-05 01:14 AM



Recall

there is
a sound
in the echo
of raindrops
as they
shadow
the earth
nothing in
that rhythm
goes unheard

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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1 posted 2002-12-05 03:04 AM


and to you as well, in kind . . . "echo splash"
Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2002-12-05 11:36 AM


:P nice
garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-05 11:41 AM


So true, Helen. Nature has so many different sounds,
if we will only listen. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-12-05 11:42 AM


1slick_lady
If you listen and I'm listening, enjoyed.

Salty
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5 posted 2002-12-05 12:26 PM


a sound in the echo of raindrops....how beautiful this sounds.  

Nice work !!!!
~Salty

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-12-05 12:28 PM


loved this one Helen...quite lovely *s
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