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Trista Gale
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since 2002-12-04
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0 posted 2002-12-04 09:59 PM


This boy I always see
seems to be a mystery to me.

He makes me feel bad
when I see him sad.

One day I will look him in the eye,
and ask him why he crys.

He looks like he wants to die,
I somehow don't know why.

I want to change his face,
and take him to a better place.


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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2002-12-04 10:23 PM


Friendship is good medicine...
Enjoyed your perspective. ThisDiamond

Cathie Arnold
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since 2002-12-03
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2 posted 2002-12-04 10:49 PM


Not bad, not bad. Nice job for your first post. Look forward to more of your work. Take Care.

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3 posted 2002-12-05 12:21 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) I know hust how you feel, sweet friend, I used to be this sad strange little boy and I rememnber hearing how much my mom begged me to be helped and finally when I faced His love my life has changed, time will ease the hurting and I know soon you will be able to touch his heart and he will grow with a golden heart filled with so much love to share! (sigh) I send my prayers and angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Trista, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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