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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-12-04 09:08 PM


When
even your heart
has no one to
love

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-04 09:12 PM


Ahhh Barry!
~and Hugs of course~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2002-12-04 09:21 PM


Barry -- I like that twist.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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3 posted 2002-12-04 09:21 PM


Barry

That would be alone for sure.  Amazing how a few words can evoke such feeling.


ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-12-04 10:21 PM


Oh...
Magnus
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5 posted 2002-12-04 10:23 PM


Giggling at TD's response...OH!

Don't worry,  I am fine...just writing
a short 20 or less....coulda been a 9 or less.

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6 posted 2002-12-04 10:24 PM


Well, dear magnetic one, your heart dwells in the chest of someone mighty worthy of being loved!

~ If this was your heart you were talking about, then it needs to get its valves checked!

EA

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7 posted 2002-12-05 05:41 AM


Sad sighs!
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8 posted 2002-12-05 08:14 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very sad, sweet friend, it saddens me to see so many face these feelings, as do so many children too who don't get the love they deserve and can't learn the biggest blessing of love! (sad sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-12-05 08:18 AM


Barry,
So your a member of the lonely hearts club.
LOL I don't think so.

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10 posted 2002-12-05 08:36 AM




Now that is lonely! And creative.


warm regards, Pat

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11 posted 2002-12-05 09:25 AM


AAAAWWWWW....
That hurts!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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12 posted 2002-12-05 09:59 AM



...then He turned
and took me in
even though
I lost love in Him

vandana
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13 posted 2002-12-06 07:36 PM


ENJOYED
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14 posted 2002-12-06 08:01 PM


Tis a sad state indeed. So much said in so little. Well done, Magnus.


Sunkissed

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