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Love Letter
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Love Letter |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Deep within the pages of an old book a folded letter faded and worn Opened with care reveals your words The promise of love eternal, never kept Tiny pieces of ripped paper flow from my hand like snowflakes On a frozen day a long time from you..and those words |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh dang!! This is SO good! I love this!!! And...I'm keeping it! ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, this is really good. And being the "hopeless romantic" that I am, I'm going to put it in my library, too. Thanks for sharing, friend.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Raphael This was simply exquisite and so much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...like snowflakes... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Somehow snowflakes remind me of freedom. Good write. ThisDiamond |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You really can write, Raph! This was wonderful! I closed my eyes and envisioned the scene.... EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you so much Nancy you're way too sweet! What an honor! Ethel you truly are a romantic and again thank you for sharing all of your warm words. Thank you Sue glad you enjoyed it Mark um.. thank you? I think you're saying you liked it, hope so! lol ThisDiamond in this case they truly are. EA I'm glad you liked it, this actually just happened tonight. Wrote the poem within minutes and posted it right away. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-04-2002 10:38 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very sharp, distinct, good! |
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Ice_Queen Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 29Delaware, USA |
Sentimental, angsty w/o being whiny. Short but sweet, and enough to be moving.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Perfectly written with that sting at the end that I always enjoy about your writing. This one is very accesible and I'm sure many will deem this a keeper in relate. In fact, I do  Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i'm so glad you showed me this, my dear, thanks for caring. every little helps.  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Now this is some emotive beastly stuff. This one always strikes a chord, everytime I read it. and as time passes, the more I know it so well. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I can't believe I missed this... ripped paper flow from my hand like snowflakes On a frozen day a long time from you..and those words excellent stuff Bello. into my library. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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