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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-04 07:37 PM

The caustic flow
of your disease
devours from within
A cancer of souls
that leaves
hollowed shells
of human ruin
upon a landscape
of raped innocence

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-12-04 07:55 PM

yes.. yes.. i like it. i like it alooooot. i liiiike it

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2002-12-04 08:09 PM

i love dark, depressive pieces like this... especially during the holidays.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2002-12-04 10:37 PM

thanks for a breath of life once in a while
on this candyland

Ice_Queen
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 29
Delaware, USA

4 posted 2002-12-04 10:52 PM

Dark...visual...but alil gory for me.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-12-04 11:00 PM

...human ruins on a landscape of raped innocence...very, very powerful description.

masterful and hard-hitting..

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2002-12-04 11:26 PM

Thanks Eagle glad you like it..aloooooot

Christopher those pieces are inspired by the holidays for some

Thanks inkedgodess.

Ice_Queen not gory just honest

Thank you very much Balladeer my favourite lines as well.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2002-12-05 03:05 AM

Strong sentiments but I can appreciate them.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-12-05 03:19 AM

Raph, this was a very strong and powerful poem. You wrote it very well.
Thanks,

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

9 posted 2002-12-05 05:20 AM

Whoa--someone light a candle!! Brutally honest write, enjoyed a trip on the dark side!

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

10 posted 2002-12-05 07:54 AM

Wow! This is stronger thanna acre of garlic!!!

fairydustwing
Junior Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 17
U.K., London

11 posted 2002-12-05 08:02 AM

Powerful and dark, the lengh gives it real impact, the meaning is right there - BAM!
I like it

fairydust x

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2002-12-05 10:36 PM

Thanks for the support as always Mark..

thank you Ethel i needed to vent

thank you sandpiper candles lit...calm now

Toerag is that strong as in powerful words or strong as in it stinks like garlic? lol

Thank you fairydust, it was longer but i shortened it for that effect. Welcome to PIP

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2002-12-06 11:02 AM

ditto.........on my above reply, but this:

do your john poem,
thers plenty of room in the cyberocean

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