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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-04 04:38 PM



Just when I am at my lowest down
You somehow show up and change that frown.
A little jest here and a little more there
and before I know it, I'm laughing here.

Amazing the medicines I must take
when all I need is a You-pill to wake
up the Me that is filled with the more of desire.
Yes, You are the one who can light this one's fire.

Even when gone, and my mind tends to wander
I sink into You-thoughts, my time then to squander.
The warmth that can still all my moments at hand
comes from bathing in memories always unplanned.

For you see as each evening begins to unfold
I am lost in eternity, in arms, Yours, in hold.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-12-04 07:03 PM


Maureen,
A very sweet write, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-12-04 07:09 PM


Ahhh just the sap in me seeping out *s...Thanks Sy...hope your holidays bring you joy.
wishing you and Isabel the best of times.

M

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
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...Coming to
3 posted 2002-12-04 07:19 PM


Very sweet poem. A you-pill, I like that lol. Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2002-12-04 07:21 PM


There is always that special someone who can lift our spirits. No matter how down we might be.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-12-04 07:37 PM


Ah Maureen this is lovely.
So nice to have that special someone to make you smile.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-12-05 03:23 PM


WinterWren..what's wrong with a You-pill.
I take them every morning...through my eyes
M


Sue,yes, I love having a special someone in my life.



Thank you, Nancy

  

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2002-12-06 10:00 AM



lost in eternity in his arms, very nice sentiments.
but he is accessible during the daytime too,
i hope..for you

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