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Sega13
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 5
Chicago

0 posted 2002-12-04 02:56 PM



When I look into your eyes
I wish I could see,
the sweet little boy you used to be.

I miss it when you called me names,
and the way you picked on me.

Why did you have to change,
change into a person I don't know.
You've changed into a man,
a man with a cold heart.

All I can see in your eyes
is a man who never keeps his promises,
and who always tells a lie.

But now I can see
a boy who turned into a man,
a man with curiousity.

© Copyright 2002 Kagome Shields - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2002-12-04 03:26 PM


sometimes i say some of these things too...
when i look in the mirror.

excellent theme. you captured it well.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

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