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Sega13
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0 posted 2002-12-03 09:23 PM



Some people dream to be stars
others dream to go to Mars,
and some just dream of fancy cars.

But may I ask with a kind heart,
how can you dream a dream
when it can tear your future apart.

Go ahead dream that dream,
but in the end it will float down stream.

© Copyright 2002 Kagome Shields - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-03 09:41 PM


Welcome to Passions, Sega.  
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-12-03 09:57 PM


Sega,
It figures Sunshine beat me here! And by the way, may I also welcome you to Passions? Okay...WELCOME!!! But I gotta say, dreams are better than the alternatives. Hope you love it here as much as I do!!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 2002-12-03 10:30 PM


welcome to passions!!



and dreaming is the only way i got this far.  otherwise i would have been long gone.

/jen/

i'm freezing, i'm starving, i'm bleeding to death.  everything's fine.  [tracy bonham]

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4 posted 2002-12-03 10:56 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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5 posted 2002-12-03 11:22 PM




(sigh) Ah, yes, certainly if we sacrifice our dreams they can run free of us, but if we cherish these dreams which never cease to comfort us, such a marvel of light is beheld! This is a powerful pontificating debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kagome, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kagome, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

whiskey
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6 posted 2002-12-03 11:37 PM


Dreams are wonderful, the problems start when you cant tell whats a dream and whats real , Great first post Welcome
garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-12-03 11:42 PM





WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS

Sega, I hope that you enjoy it here at PIP as much as I do.
You wrote a good poem, but I'm a "dreamer", too. To me
that's part of what hope and faith are. Without those,
I, personally, would be most miserable.
Thank you for sharing your poem. I'll look for more of your poetry.   

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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