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the ride |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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scattered brown leaves, shaken aside, sent from their weary source, to eternitys ride, or do they choose to leave with grace on the lure of the wind towards freedoms embrace? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
on the lure of wind I am sure.... a leaf have dignity. like this... the metaphore could be extended to people in leave of relationships as well.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice write.....are you indelible? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
what do you mean? toeman? indelible? |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Beautiful write. I could visualize the picture very well. Im putting it in my library and there's nothing you can do about it! WinterWren |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is so beautifully woven, sweet friend, I believe they fly for freedom and their children are born in the spring to again bring glitter to all of Mother Nature's bounty! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice, I enjoyed it  |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"towards freedom's embrace"--what a beautiful thought--enjoyed! |
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