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Auguste
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0 posted 2002-12-03 04:32 PM



Her Heartbeat Quickens


These days it’s hard to find a man
that treats a woman with respect,
who longs to gaze into her eyes
to see in hers, his own, reflect.

A woman is art in the flesh.
Each curve of desire feeds the eyes.
Her heartbeat quickens at your touch
and your own quickens with her sighs.

You’ll find that she has intellect
and grow to love all that she is.
The body ages, but her heart
is where a man should place his kiss.


© Copyright 2002 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
Soleil Noir
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1 posted 2002-12-03 04:36 PM



...A woman is art in the flesh...

How true this is...
and a man can be the sculptor...
if he chisles so...

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2 posted 2002-12-03 04:55 PM



Michael,

Her heart is where a man should place his kiss.  OH! How beautiful is this?

This is a wonderful love poem, so deep, caring and wise.


I think you've captured the way true love is. Such a joy to read of it.

Hugs and warmest regards, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-03-2002 05:00 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-12-03 05:14 PM


Beautiful words such as these should definitely be told to someone special.


Salty
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4 posted 2002-12-03 05:20 PM


Such sweet words....from a true heart.

I bet you do just fine with the ladies *S*

~Salty

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5 posted 2002-12-03 05:24 PM


..."her heart is where a man should place his kiss"---I may not be your woman, but I just felt a warm and loving kiss on my heart....

Your tenderness and gentle expression of love literally caused tears to fall from my eyes of blue........now my eyes are red, but my heart is happy!

~ sending you angel kisses

EA

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6 posted 2002-12-03 05:53 PM


"The body ages, but her heart
is where a man should place his kiss."


Michael..what can I say?  
You obviously know the tender heart of a woman well.
This is so very romantic!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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7 posted 2002-12-03 06:45 PM


Michael

Tender and endearing, just like you.  

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8 posted 2002-12-03 07:01 PM


Michael....awesome thoughts and very much on
target....  Nicely said,  and I do believe
you have made a lot of friends with this
write...

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9 posted 2002-12-03 07:16 PM


This is so sweet Michael, as is yourself.  It reminds me of that old saying, there is a place you can touch a woman that will drive her crazy.......
her heart.  Very well done m' friend!

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10 posted 2002-12-03 07:53 PM


Michael - Ahhh sweet poet, this makes me sigh with pleasure. This poem is going directly into my library. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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11 posted 2002-12-03 08:24 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Michael, it is so sad but true, sweet friend, so many men fail to realize what true love is and only care of the silicone or outside beauty and never listen to a womans needs or desires with respect, as the heart is what should be touched affectionately with love! (sigh) I dream so much of making my Joanna happy forever and loving her with all my heart, God Bless You, you are a true romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-12-03 10:16 PM


"These days it’s hard to find a man
that treats a woman with respect,
who longs to gaze into her eyes
to see in hers, his own, reflect.

A woman is art in the flesh...

The body ages, but her heart
is where a man should place his kiss."
_________________________________

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! The entire poem is worthy of applause and all men should take heed to such wise words.  The message in this should come naturally to all men, however, it seems that it's become a long forgotten art.

I'm keeping this and am gonna Fed Ex it to all of the men in Canada   
Remember, when you start that seminar for men in North America - I'm your manager!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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