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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2002-12-03 04:27 PM



Dipping

Husk me with your voice
Like summer corn, tassle set
Butter melts over
You only thought summer was gone
Come December, relish June

[This message has been edited by Soleil Noir (12-03-2002 09:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-03 04:37 PM


I do relish Junes warmth today... or is that desire...


nicely done...

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2 posted 2002-12-03 04:43 PM


After the shuckin' pops the corn. Enjoyed
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3 posted 2002-12-03 06:01 PM


Oooh Dang!!... this is so good!
Great to see you here today!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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4 posted 2002-12-03 09:01 PM


Soleil

Yes, a husky voice like summer corn, sounds so good!

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5 posted 2002-12-03 09:40 PM


Wonderful!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2002-12-03 11:41 PM




(smiles) Oh Soleil, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, there are remnants of every seasons harvests everywhere, guess we all have that Perspherone in our blood! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-12-04 01:03 AM


Now I'm hungry! (and cold... I most definitely relish June!) This is a cool (no pun) vignette. Of the best kind.

C

ps - tassle set, which is really cool, might work better as tassle-set

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8 posted 2002-12-04 01:07 AM


Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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