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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-12-03 01:44 PM



It's definitely not yesterday.
The chilled scenery out my window
matches my curtained mood.

Only days ago the warm sun
surrounded my outer being,
masking the chill inside.

Funny,
how the weather can move me
from hot to cold and back again.

Funny,
how thinking of you
does the same.

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Salty
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1 posted 2002-12-03 02:02 PM


OH the moods ...brought on to us by weather, music, smells, and of course people.  

I just really loved reading this ...twice *S*


~Salty

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2002-12-03 02:37 PM


Unfortunately, even a sense of humor doesn't always allow such to be funny...

-MVS

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Aenimal
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3 posted 2002-12-03 04:03 PM


Funny,
how thinking of you
does the same.


Love the relation between weather and mood. Great piece of writing Midnite or (Kacy?)never sure if people want their names or handles used.

raph

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4 posted 2002-12-03 04:57 PM


..."The chilled scenery out my window
    matches my curtained mood."

---Really sets the stage and tone of this poem! You conveyed your feelings very well.

~ sending you some sunshine and a warm hug

EA

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5 posted 2002-12-03 06:16 PM


As much as I like your Jiminy poetry, I like the Kacy poetry even more.  
WinterWren
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6 posted 2002-12-03 06:36 PM


I liked this poem alot. I liked how you compared thinking of this person with cold and all that.

WinterWren
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7 posted 2002-12-03 11:48 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, I think we all have these days and I hope everything is alright! (sigh) Sounds like deja vu to me too, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2002-12-04 12:37 PM


Salty, glad you enjoyed the weather report.

Mark, exactly.

Raph, either nom is OK. Thanks for reading.

Ea, thank you!

Dunc, (Jiminy will be jealous)

Wren, thanks. I'm happy if the chill in this warmed you.

Noah, Yes, all is OK dear friend. Winter always triggers a flood for me.

Sandpiper
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9 posted 2002-12-06 04:20 AM


Emotions, just as weather--ever-changing.  Enjoyed!
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10 posted 2002-12-06 12:45 PM


my guy says that's the Dr. Jeckyl and Mr. Hyde personality....and I have it! This is a beautiful way to describe how I've been for years.
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