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Chris? Chris Who?
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Chris? Chris Who? |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! 
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Oh, the one who left me in the cold, With nothing; screaming at the sky. Not knowing whether I would live or die. I prayed about this 'dear' of mine, everynight, for God to show him the wrong and the right. I cried out his name during times I felt so alone.He was never there; My heart should've known. All he needed was trust and understanding. If only he believed in our love... -everlasting. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Who? Yes, he is now on the who? list that may grow with time. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
It is odd how we blame ourselves when love doesn't work out....the ~if only I would have's~. You've produced a very emotional, touching poem. If you are writing about yourself, my heart goes out to you, for long ago, it used to be as difficult for me to unhook myself from these same feelings you write... Keep writing, your poetry will help you as well as us, as some remember what it ~was~ like, or might be, now. Hugs and warm regard, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kristine, it sounds like he may stay on the "Who?" list, too. Very realistic write, lady. Hope all is well with you.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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fairydustwing Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 17U.K., London |
Hi! I like the realism of this poem, I can certainly relate to the feeling. much love, fairydustwing x |
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fairydustwing Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 17U.K., London |
I can relate to the feeling in this poem, thanks for sharing. much love, fairydustwing x |
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