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fairydustwing Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 17U.K., London |
hypnosis His hand brushes my face: joyful whispers dancing over fruit scented flesh. Ocean eyes beg attention and I swim into them, limply surrendering into warm arms, encapsulating me within a bubble of bliss...mouth over mouth, soft, sunken whirlwind; hot breath melts my insides, as we sink into a private universe, where two worlds collide. My mind is hypnotized with adoration, I am flying, I am unraveled, I am stardust. Within each kiss, reality ceases, gravity is gone, he halts time and within every kiss I can confirm my dreams: that he is mine...that he is mine... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Yay!!! Awwwwwwwww, this is such a romantic and gorgeous debut filled with so many pixie dust smiles, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-02-2002 09:15 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your first post! Looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!! Enjoy yourself here. Great first post!! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a pretty depiction of that first glow of love. That first “take your breath away” kind of kiss. Welcome, I enjoyed your first post. You can never win or lose |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Amazing imagery! Welcome to PIP you're going to love it here. May the shine of that love never dull. |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
Welcome...great poem! Thanks for sharing. Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hynosis, keep this up and we will all turn to stardust! WELCOME! |
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