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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-12-02 08:05 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

In his mind he stores a picture
On the days when she's not near
He can bring her face to mind
And hear her voice so very clear

He remembers so much about her
Like her skin so soft and fair
And the way she closed her eyes
As he ran his fingers through her hair

He imagines the feel of her body
And the warmth of her tender touch
Those three words had eluded him
But he loved her so very much

Such a love they share so special
In their love they now rejoice
'tho their hearts are far in distance
They still share the same voice


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (12-02-2002 08:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-02 09:20 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this love poem so deeply touched my heart, sweet friend, I can relate to these feelings so well as I love my Joanna so much and dream so much to finally hug her and kiss her and make her happy forever as I can feel her touches and kisses in my dreams! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true master at romance, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-12-02 09:24 PM


Very nicely done SueT,  and your graphics
add tremendously to your poetry...

CSKpoet
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3 posted 2002-12-03 12:25 PM


Just beautiful and so graphicly romantic and touching..
You added your special magic to this wonderfully done poem.
aloha and warm hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Bridget Shenachie
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4 posted 2002-12-03 12:33 PM


Hi Sue!

Such a romantic picture and poem.  This is such a beautiful expression of the love that we carry in our hearts and sustains us when we are apart from our loved one(s).

Enjoyed the read!
Shenachie

ethome
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5 posted 2002-12-03 05:28 AM


Beautiful work Sue!

I too love the graphics, they truly enhance the mood of your write!

Robert Adamson
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6 posted 2002-12-03 08:37 AM


I like counting on you to have a demystified view of romance.

etoodog

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7 posted 2002-12-03 09:35 AM


Ah Sue...you do write romance so well.
And your pics add to them perfectly.
Well done sweet poetess.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-12-03 06:13 PM


Beautifully romantic...James
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9 posted 2002-12-04 12:56 PM


Sue:  I enjoyed this poem and the picture too. Lovely sentiments expressed in it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-12-04 01:13 AM


Hi Sue,
I don't know how I missed this one. It's beautiful, as always.
The picture just sets it off, too. You are so good at writing
these love poems, lady. Thank you for sharing them with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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11 posted 2002-12-04 03:55 AM


this is beautiful!
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