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0 posted 2002-12-02 06:39 PM


Some people may think
that I look at life through dreams,
rose-colored glasses

But, that's fine with me
for I'm liking what I see
through my thoughts and dreams


So happy am I
when I can dwell on good things
of our future life,


You and I will be
together for all our lives
for forevermore


We will never part,
united for all our days,
until death do part


Together to be
in holy matrimony,
as husband and wife


When I think on this
the reality around
escapes from my mind


Stays away from me
for a little while it seems
having peace of mind


If I let myself
I would be depressed always
for things aren't perfect

That's not how life is,
always completely happy
in my life or world


Trouble all around,
famine, hurt, homeless people,
wars, strife, hate, sickness,

Heartache, depression,
are seen all over the world,
look everywhere

Seeing what I mean,
see how it makes you feel sad,
feeling so helpless

Want to do something
I wish I could change the world
and knew what to do

With power to do
what needs done to fix these things
and to heal the earth


And life in the world
to help all to be happy
and safe, warm, and well

I wish it could be
will it ever be on earth...
only in Heaven


'til then I will try,
to think about our future,
how happy we'll be


Having my good thoughts,
dreams of our life together,
staying happy now

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-02-2002 06:47 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-02 06:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, I know just how you feel, there are so many tears in the world and my heart goes out to them all and I believe if we can all look through rose-colored glasses and believe in the innocence of a childs heart in us all then we can solve all these problems and love can flood the whole world! (kiss on cheek) May you always believe in your dreams of Gary then watch as so much happiness follows, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-12-02 06:50 PM


Ethel, you have the secret of a happy life right there. Dwell on the beauty of life...
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3 posted 2002-12-02 06:54 PM


Noah,
Thank you so much for your encouragement. You are always so sweet.
I tried to do this with the 5-7-5 syllable, but it
didn't look right when I posted it. So, I went back and edited.
It's not quite so jumbled this way. It's hard sometimes
for me to say what's in my heart. It feels like it needs out,
though sometimes it comes out jumbled. You always know
what I'm trying to say, though.
THANK   YOU, Noah.......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-12-02 06:57 PM


Michael, thank you so much. Yeah, I feel guilty sometimes,
because I'm so happy with my love and there's so many troubles
in the world. I really would fix all the troubles if
I could. Again, thanks.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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5 posted 2002-12-02 07:27 PM


'... I'm liking what I see
through my thoughts and dreams ...'

In my humble opinion, whatever it takes in this day and age to help us be happy, is what we need to do. If you need rose colored glasses, by all means wear them. And hon, I'll bet you look stunning in them!

Life is tough, go for the gusto...Marti


P.S. Nice job writing this as senryu's!!!

[This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (12-02-2002 07:28 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-12-02 07:59 PM


Above all you are bestowed with honesty, encouragement and just lots of good things. Thank you for the glasses, anytime.

etoodog

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7 posted 2002-12-02 08:05 PM


Oh yes, Marti, I feel the same way. There's so much unhappiness,
that we are so blessed if we are truly happy, aren't we?
Thank you for your response about the senryus, too.
I really appreciate your comments.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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8 posted 2002-12-02 08:07 PM


Robert, thank you so very much for your comment. I
really do appreciate, friend. Thanks, too for reading
this. It was kind of long, I know.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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9 posted 2002-12-02 08:22 PM




Ethel,

I think you said what was in your heart just beautifully. You are a treasure, and rather than feel any guilt, know the good aura you will consistantly give out to those around you, strangers and family will automatically be rewarded by your giving, loving, happy state of mind.  

Smiles to you and hugs and warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2002-12-02 08:26 PM


Pat,
Thank you so much. You always know just the right thing to say.
You are an Angel, sweet lady.


"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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11 posted 2002-12-02 08:35 PM


Ethel

I think that if more people saw life the way you do...there would be much less of all those sad things.  It's like the ripple effect...one smile and happy heart could be the start of peace.  Loved your poem!  

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12 posted 2002-12-02 08:35 PM


Hello Ethel

Such a wonderful message you have given all of us.  I think we should all hold tightly to our hopes and our dreams for they can bring us so much comfort.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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13 posted 2002-12-02 10:15 PM


Martie, thank you so much for reading my poem.
I appreciate your comments, too. Wouldn't it be great if
everyone could be happy and at peace with others and themselves?

Thanks, again.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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14 posted 2002-12-02 10:19 PM


Sue, thank you. Your comments are very sweet and I appreciate them.
Oh, I really liked your poetry that I read.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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15 posted 2002-12-02 10:58 PM


Here's to hope and love. May we all find the answers and live happily ever after. Thank you for these words of hope we can always use more of them.


Raph

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16 posted 2002-12-02 11:26 PM


"Brighten the corner where you are" Love, it's intimate truth, is as close as we get to bliss. If you are true and honest and help those within your limited sphere than you are doing more than most and deserve some peace.
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17 posted 2002-12-02 11:45 PM


Raph, thanks for reading this long poem and for your
nice comments. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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18 posted 2002-12-02 11:47 PM


Richard, I really appreciate your reading and replying with
such a sweet comment. Thank you, kind Sir.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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19 posted 2002-12-03 12:31 PM


Ethel: Having the beautiful mind to choose the beauty and overcome the evil we see around us is having a mind like God wished us to have. Your faith is a deep and healing message to others who are caught in nets of despair..especially at holiday time.
Your poem is just outstanding in example to us all and big hugs for sharing that with us all
angel hugs and
love, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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20 posted 2002-12-03 05:02 AM


Ethel~ This makes me realize just how lucky I am to have those people in my life that I love so very much and how greatful I am for all the other gifts in my life, because many people have nothing.Thanks for sharing...Paul
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21 posted 2002-12-03 08:58 AM


Cheryl, thank you so very much for your heartfelt reply.
Your comments were very much appreciated.
Yes, the holidays are a very depressing time for a lot of people.
I hope that you have happy ones, sweet lady.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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22 posted 2002-12-03 09:01 AM


Thank you, Paul, for reading my very long poem. Your
comments are very appreciated, too. I'm sure that your loved
can feel the great love that you have for them. Again, thanks.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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23 posted 2002-12-03 03:21 PM


There is much sadness in the world, but we can still celebrate and appreciate the wonderful times we are often blessed with. If you get to share that with a partner then you are all the more blessed.
If our light of love shines then we can share it, and bless someone else with the gift of love too.
God bless you.

Deb

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Thank you, Deb...
Your replies are always so sweet. I really appreciate your
comments. They are very true.
May God bless you, too, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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25 posted 2002-12-03 05:14 PM


Sounds as though you have the right recipe...how lucky you are and even luckier that you realize it.


A Very Nice WRiTe


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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26 posted 2002-12-03 07:23 PM


Salty, I really thank you for your reading and for your reply.
Your comments were very nice.  I appreciate them.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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