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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
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Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-02 12:31 PM



Sick of myself
Hate this wealth
Don’t want talent I can’t use
Wish I didn’t have this abuse

Ouch
You don’t realise it hurts
You scowl
I crumble

For what you see is never true
I react but not to you
Because to me it’s more
More than just a day

Don’t want to live
If it’s through this hurt
I scream but you never hear
I’m silenced by my fear

Stop
Please leave me
You shout
I shatter

This isn’t everyday
It’s now in second
If you don’t stop I won’t ever return
But that’s your choice

I don’t want my own extinction
But others strength of will
May carry that through
And if I’m not saved

Never mind
You still have one another.

Rosie Mitchell

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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
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1 posted 2002-12-02 12:42 PM


Ouch and wow at the same time; Sorry to hear you hurting so, Beautiful poetry though - this is what poetry should be like . Thankyou i havn't heard a decent grungy poem for some time .
L.of.L. Tom .
XXX

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

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2 posted 2002-12-02 12:53 PM


Rosie, you sure do know how to write it, girl, and
do a very good job of it, too.
I do hope this isn't you hurting like this. If so, I
hope things get better for you real soon.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England
3 posted 2002-12-05 10:44 AM


Everything hurts me
I'm weak
Oh well
Im sick of myself cos of it

Someone hit me quick!
:p

Rosie Mitchell

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