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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-01 08:22 PM




red wine
pours from the sky,
filling in
theblack outlines
along
the forsaken trees,
as nightfall
comes down slowly
color by color
breaking the
spell of sleep
cast on
this monochromatic
day


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-12-01 08:31 PM




(smiles) Wow, oh my gosh, I just love the colors you put in your words, sweet friend, I love gazing upon red and orange sunsets and sunrises and watching the embers burn upon the horizons surrounding it! (big huggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
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on the roof again
2 posted 2002-12-01 09:12 PM


i'm more of a sunset person myself,
but this sounds beautiful...the first fingers of light flooding out onto the world.
great pictures you've given

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

[This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (12-01-2002 09:12 PM).]

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-12-01 09:43 PM


Sounds a bit like a day....tattooed.

Think so, Marie?

Ed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-12-01 09:47 PM


Pretty write, even in it's display.
The colors of the mind are magnificent.
ThisDiamond

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-12-01 09:54 PM


This is beautiful. Your words paint such a lovely picture
in my mind's eye. I love sunsets and sunrises both. They are so
beautiful. I've got lots of them on my computer's screensavers.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful picture.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-01-2002 09:55 PM).]

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