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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-12-01 10:59 AM


Happy Once Again
~ By Sue ~

There will come a day
In the morning I will wake
With no thought of you

No more memories
Of you will haunt me again
They will all be gone

Some days are so good
Other days I feel so down
I just want to cry

I look forward to
When the time does come to say
That final goodbye

By then I do hope
I will feel no pain leaving
You here far behind

True, times may be rough
Not so rough I can not reach
The dreams I do have

You will not be there
To bring me down once again
Like you always do

Life will be for me
Happy once again you see
'Cause I will be free

12-1-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-01 11:02 AM


"Life will be for me
Happy once again you see
'Cause I will be free"


Sue, whenever you feel lonely or down remember these words you wrote...okay?
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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2 posted 2002-12-01 11:04 AM


whew...

a heartbreaker from the heartbroken.

ouch.


inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2002-12-01 02:42 PM




some of them are just so unworthy, arent they?

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-01 03:00 PM


"True, times may be rough
Not so rough I can not reach
The dreams I do have"


Such true, words, sweet Sue. Hold on to those dreams, dear friend.
I'm sure they will some true for you, if you'll just hold on and
keep the faith.

(BTW, I like the 5-7-5 rhythm of each verse.)


"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-01-2002 03:02 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-12-01 07:52 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Always keep the faith, sweet friend, you are a very special friend to us all and have a golden heart so deserving of this happiness I know will encounter you soon enough! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
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6 posted 2002-12-02 01:34 AM


I have thought about it and believe it may magically happen one day. Thank you.

etoodog

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7 posted 2002-12-02 05:06 AM


*high five* You Go Girl!
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8 posted 2002-12-02 01:42 PM


SweetSuzieQ~

'You will not be there
To bring me down once again
Like you always do'


YES, Sue .... there IS A Santa Claus~
Keep the courage-fires burning brightly dear friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-12-02 06:48 PM


Yes hope and desire will take you there...James
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