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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-12-01 10:08 AM



Native America (A Dream)

The width and breadth of land outlined
By only depth of heart and mind
So honored were the gifts bestowed
So plentiful the buffalo

Beside the streams they would survive
Where moon and planets were alive
And those who gathered in a tribe
In stars and waters were inscribed

The land was marked by only mounds
Where death was in the sacred grounds
Andtraces of their life appear
In remnants of a hunters spear

Then nations formed with tribal name
And languages were not the same
Survival was the strongest want
The strongest would survive the hunt

The land unmarked with time evolved
Into the differences unsolved
And battle grounds became the prize
That lingered in a warrior’s eyes

The hour came, the final blow
One nation carved by buffalo
By snake and deer, by eagle wing
One songthat all the tribes would sing

The victor’s language was the tongue
Of nation’s chief, the sacred one
They intertwined in blood and vein
And brothers all one tribe became

They mixed with others from the south
And gathered round a serpent’s mouth
The learned taught how stars reflect
The numbers of the architect

The larger nation taught the ways
Of forest, hills and peaceful days
All were united in one name
And none could fight this nation’s fame

But only now respect the land
That rested in a tribal hand
The seeds of life in furrows laid
The land of plenty farmers made

The buffalo and wild horse
Survived their peaceful measured course
The land, the crops, the deer, the stream
Became the star of Europe’s dream

Elizabeth Santos

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1 posted 2002-12-01 10:15 AM


Stunning write Liz!  A that will be enjoyed by many.  Hugs.
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2 posted 2002-12-01 10:54 AM


OhDearLady~
You KNOW this one touches me tenderly~
Thanking you for this beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-12-01 11:01 AM



Just reading up on some Navajo lore this morning after watching Windwalkers yesterday, so you know I enjoyed this bit from you, Lady S...thank you so much!

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4 posted 2002-12-01 02:29 PM


Since I was a little girl, I have a had a passion for North American Indian lore. This poem is going to be a welcomed addition to my library of fine poetic works.

~ warm hugs to you, dear poetess

Linda

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5 posted 2002-12-01 08:12 PM




Yay!!! Oh Elizabeth, this is soooooooo precious, sweet friend, I love Native American culture as so much of my ancestors were born on this sacred land and I hereby continue to celebrate and devote myself in honor of their traditions as I possess the blood of the buffalo! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-12-02 02:35 PM


Liz, I am fascinated by our Native American brothers and sisters. You have shed a beautiful light and I thank you for sharing this with us.

Hugs dear lady, Marti

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7 posted 2002-12-02 04:48 PM


Liz there was no picture that could do these words justice so I left it standing alone to paint a very vivid picture.  Bless your heart for this one.

                
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

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