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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-12-01 09:53 AM

Quiet Remembrance

I gaze across the horizon
the sunshine warms my face,
my mind slowly drifts away
to another time, another place.

We walked along softly talking,
laughing, and holding hands.
Your eyes searched into my soul
well I feel deeper into a trance.

With you I felt so many things
that I had never felt before,
there were so many mixed emotions
and yet, still, there was so much more.

You showed me how to trust,
how to take, and not just give.
You taught me the realities of love,
while my spirit learned to live.

These gifts I hold here in my heart,
and in my heart they shall always stay.
Today I contemplate about tomorrow,
in quiet remembrance of yesterday.
03-08-00
revised 12-01-02

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you 'hear' "me"?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-12-01 10:00 AM

Many will hear this one, Donna...
it speaks not just to one type of relationship,
but to many.
Well done, m'dear...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-12-01 10:57 AM

GentlestSpirit~

'These gifts I hold here in my heart,
and in my heart they shall always stay.
Today I contemplate about tomorrow,
in quiet remembrance of yesterday.'

Oh my ... this thought walks right into my heart~
Such a tender thought to hold~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-12-01 08:22 PM

(smiles) Oh Donna, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, friendhip and love can teach us all so much and you always touch our hearts and inspire us with the warm smile and friendship you pour out from your giving heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-12-01 08:33 PM

"You showed me how to trust,
how to take, and not just give."
Exactly. I love the honest twist of an old saying.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-12-01 09:05 PM

Soft and lovely work Donna. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-12-02 02:30 PM

Donna, this is so beautiful and it feels so special to me.

Thank you, I needed to read something like this.

Hugs, Marti

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2002-12-02 02:32 PM

Donna, this is so beautiful and special

Nicely written.

Hugs, Marti

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

8 posted 2002-12-02 02:34 PM

THis is a beautiful write ...as gentle as your name.
~Salty

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-12-02 05:42 PM

Yes, many of us can relate to this one, Donna. So very tenderly written, my friend. *hugs*

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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