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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-12-01 09:52 AM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#96"

Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON


fears

tumbled sleep

a trellis
of knotted thought
and capital vines

an ugly boss laughing

knew world's orders


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-12-01 09:59 AM


I can only come up with a WOW
just now...
but I'll be back with something intelligent soon.

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2 posted 2002-12-01 10:19 AM


This was brilliant and deserves a reply of the same calliber, so I must now respectfully bid you adieu!

EA

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-12-01 10:27 AM


MARK,
Now if you were on a boat and threw out a line, you would yell, Mark Twain. Enjoyed.

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4 posted 2002-12-01 10:29 AM


Christopher, even though I don't seem to ever be able to
give you a deserving response for these words of wisdom
you write so well, I do want you to know that I'm reading them.
All your poetry I've read is superb. thank you for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2002-12-01 05:28 PM


Sunshine, your intelligence precedes you.

Earth Angel, any reply will do...  Thank you.

Sy, I reckon Aunt Polly wouldn't want me yellin'...

Ethel, I appreciate all your responses.  Thank you.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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6 posted 2002-12-01 06:13 PM


anxieties

night wrestling

sifting through
a network of
new garbage

inept leadership

outranked again

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7 posted 2002-12-01 06:45 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Mark, this is excellent, sweet friend, I love it! Sadly CEO's are stealing others money and imperialist companies are using children in slave labor to apply their comfortable soles of their shoes and etc. (sad sigh) You speak of everything so vividly, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-12-01 06:49 PM


Amazing...YOU are amazing...
And I don't care if I'm repeating myself!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2002-12-01 07:08 PM


Kacy:

Power
Button
Off

Noah:  Welcome to "the business world"...

Nancy, your echos are most pleasant.  Thank you, kindly.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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