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Will you
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Will you |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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"Will you" Will you see my face Look for my love see it upon Will you call my name Find my love in me within Will you want my all Share my love release Will you look into my eyes See my love deep within them Will you hold my hand Feel my love touch you Will you kiss my lips Feel my love flow you into Will you hold me close Feel my love through me to you Will you be the one Know my love Hold my heart Will you walk with me Guide my love through eternity Will you stand next to me Love my love Own my soul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Is that whiskey talking? LOL enjoyed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sweet surrender to love will you die for me? let me die for you?is what i usually wonder next - hope this doesnt sound too morbid, but its like an natural response to your very moving words |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I enjoyed this. thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful write. Enjoyed much, thanks for sharing. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Nice to read you Whiskey  Maree. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
thats great, Wiskey. It was a good poem. Never be normal! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, I've never read your work in the couple of months I've been here. I really enjoyed your poem. It was very well-written and I liked the style that you wrote it in, too. Thanks for sharing it with us and I hope to read more of your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
a very lovely Write. enjoyed the read ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Julie, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I have missed reading your gorgeous words so much here and I wish this happiness to always fill your deserving heart! (big hugggsssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Riveting questions my friend... brought forth with strength. ThisDiamond |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks to everyone for their replys and comments, I am glad to be back writing have many more to share with everyone. Thankyou all for reading Julie |
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