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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-12-01 08:53 AM



No Deadline To Meet

Story of continuation
No deadline to meet
Again over and over
Sentiments I repeat

Times I've reflected
Sequence of events
Expressing thoughts
Emotional contents

Lasting impressions
The unique delights
The golden threads
Those given insights

Here contemplating
On the old and new
Thoughts that count
I can inwardly view

Collecting memories
Or of those yet to be
The pleasures of you
Introspections of me


Hope ©2002

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whiskey
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1 posted 2002-12-01 09:04 AM


Very nice, I enjoyed it alot Thank you for sharing it
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-01 08:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, forget all that conformity in college papers, forget the five-paragraph requirement, forget the double-spaces and paranthetical documentation and indentation, for your story is perfect in the way it is told through your gorgeous poetry! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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