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You Made Me A Woman
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You Made Me A Woman |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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When I woke up this morning The sun was shinin' bright As I looked out the window I was thinkin' of last night When I woke up this mornin' You were on my mind Thinkin' of the night of love we had You held me in your arms And gave me all your charms You made me a woman last night And my body burned with desire Your lovin' had set me on fire We were as one, until the mornin' sun You made me a woman last night For years I had searched For the man of my dreams Looking for him ev'ry night and day I had searched high and low But everywhere I'd go The men were only lookin' for one thing Then one sunny day, you came my way And that was when I knew My search was finally through And my body burned with desire Your lovin' had set me on fire We were as one, until the mornin' sun You made me a woman last night. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Oh, you lucky woman! But I suspect you were already a well-defined intelligent sensitive woman even before you met the man of your dreams. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Midnitesun ~ Your kind reply put a great, big smile on my face! Thank you! ~ May you have pleasant dreams tonight! EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Congratulations, an angel most deserving of the bliss she has found. Raph |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Raph ~ That was so sweet of you to say! Actually, this is part of a song I had written a few years ago and I changed it a bit so that it would read more like a poem, however, I find it still sounds kind of sing songy! Thank you! ~ warm hugs EA |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Sing songy or not, this was lovely! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I thought it was a song reading it, its the last few lines of the verses they read like choruses. I really like it and afterall aren't lyrics just poems set to music? awkward hugs back |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, whether this is song lyrics or a poem, it's still beautiful. (you knew I'd love it, didn't you?)  Thanks for sharing, sweet Earthy Angel.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
neveah ~ Why thank ya kindly! ********************************************* Raph ~ No need for you to feel your hugs to be awkward! I enjoyed your comment and it made me smile! ********************************************* ~ I appreciated your thoughtful replies! ~ goodnight hugs to you both! Sleep tight! Don't let the bed bugs bite! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel! How's Pip's resident love bug doing this fine first night of December? Snug as a bug in a rug? ~ Enjoy your dreams of sweet Gary! Night! Night! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you are a very special and loving friend and woman who deserves to forever sing with happiness in your heart! (kiss on cheek) I dream so much of making my Joanna feel special like this in the future, yay, this is a gorgeous song, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, i know this too, when u look into your lovers eyes, and can see the beauty in your own self, but i wish sometimes, i didnt need to bounce off a man to feel beautiful.............tho i like to bounce |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ I pray that someday soon, your heart's desire will be fulfilled and you will bask in the joy of giving and receiving the love that you so richly deserve. ********************************************* inkedgoddess ~ LOL!!! I bet you do!!! ********************************************* ~ hugs and smiles EA |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
 -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
that was great EA. Whoever this guy is (real or not) he is really lucky. Never be normal! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
MVS ~ That is one lascivious-looking emoticon!--I love it! ********************************************* Wind ~ Sweet of you to say so! ********************************************* ~ May your feet dance to the songs in your heart EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-01-2002 07:37 PM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What every man hopes his woman is thinking...I hope my lady does. KJ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
KJ ~ With a man who can write as sensually as you do, I'm sure she does! EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Well, you are certainly one lucky lady to have finally found Mr. Right. Hang on to him ... Hugs, Marti |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
from reading your responses I can tell you have written the words first...just waiting for the real man. I think most every man in the world would love to be the one that makes a girl into a woman. I love this as a poem..and I bet is wonderuful as a song also. NIce JOB! ~salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ You are such a sweetheart! This was just a song I wrote while my husband and I were "still as one". Mind you, he keeps wanting for us to "play that song" again, but for me, twice bitten, two thousand times shy! ~ huggles to you, my friend! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Salty ~ Thank you for such a kind and thoughtful reply!!! ~ angel hugs Earth Angel |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'll make ya giggle like a girl, scream like a woman, and you'll lose that last name!!...LOL...nice write gal... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ Howdy stranger! That is one mighty tempting offer! Let me think about it for a while! tehe Actually, I had written this song for my husband, now my wasband, and he was the man that made me a woman! ~ smoocherinos EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...Mind you, he keeps wanting for us to "play that song" again, but for me, twice bitten, two thousand times shy! ...' He made you a very WISE woman! It's obvious you can see clearly now. Don't let those glasses get fogged up. Huggles from one twisted soul to another. 'M' |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL@wasband!! That'll teach him to make you a woman! Why do I feel like you have ALWAYS been a woman??  (it's a great song!) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'M' ~ Yes, I suppose with the painful experiences that I have had in life, there has come a certain amount of wisdom. I may not have the respect for him that I once did, but I do have lots of respect for myself! Instead of an owl that coos "Hoo!" "Hoo!", I now decry, "Who?" "Who?" tehe ~ Love to you, my dear twisted soul sister! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-03-2002 10:05 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Balladeer ~ Even my wasband was amused when I referred to him as that! lol In some regards I have been a woman all of my life. When I was a little girl, I was known as the little sagacious one. When my parents tell me stories of what I was like as a child, it cracks me up! I really was a piece of work! LOL Thank you for the sweet comments! ~ Have a great day!--Have a great life! EA |
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