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Fee
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0 posted 2002-12-01 12:27 PM


With every waking moment
and every peaceful dream
Thoughts of you embrace me
and warm me from within.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-12-01 12:29 PM


WOW! Fiona! Where have you been?
Welcome back. I enjoyed your dream thoughts.

neveah5
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2 posted 2002-12-01 01:35 AM


short and sweet
the very best kind

Aenimal
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3 posted 2002-12-01 01:39 AM


love's essence captured in these few words. beautiful
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-01 01:48 AM


Fee, this is just beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Fee
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5 posted 2002-12-01 02:37 AM


Hi Midnitesun,

I have sort of been lost somewhere, but found my way back here where, well you know the saying, home is where the heart is.
I will try to stick around for awhile.

Thanks for the welcome home :-)


Neveah5, Aenimal and Garysgirl, Thanks for your kind words. I look forward to reading some of yours.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

passing shadows
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6 posted 2002-12-01 03:07 AM



Rick
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7 posted 2002-12-01 07:50 AM


Dear Fee, hello fellow Aussie, nice to read your work, got my pen moving for a few moments as well; thank you.

As embers warm the outer skin
Your smile does melt this heart within
The words you speak and loving touch
Is what I now do miss so much

Sincerely Rick

regards2you
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8 posted 2002-12-01 08:21 AM





I like your passing thoughts, for they capture love beautifully. Quite talented you are to take so few words and express so much. This has a great feeling to it. Enjoy re-reading it.

Warm Regards to you, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-12-01 08:37 AM


Fee
Good write, enjoyed.

Sunshine
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10 posted 2002-12-01 08:38 AM



Welcome back to the warm, Fee...

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