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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Amplified heartbeats pound from the depths of me as I cry your name over the waves of time, and distance becomes irrelevant and not a true measurement of anything. Do you hear my heartbeat? Is the volume set too low? I thought I just heard an echo of your heartbeat, but it was just reverberation, stereoed Keith Jarrett as I flashed back into Koln, and you. Reverie is painful some days. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-01-2002 12:41 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, ============ Reverie is painful some days ============ But so worth the trip! And you always lose me with your artist list! But so far ignorance is at least bliss. By the way, an awesome write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK, Larry. Guess I'll have to send you some REAL music. LOL. Thanks for always sharing your warm heartbeat. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Reverie can be bittersweet. I enjoyed sharing yours. EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, I enjoyed reading your poem, as always. Thanks for sharing it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
EA and Ethel, I thank you both for taking time to read and reply. My night is flooding my head and heart with memories. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it is...nice write |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don't ya hate it when that happens???? The cycles do seem to come and go. Maybe in time, they come less. We'll see, huh? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Kacy... bittersweet but oh so well done. ~Hugs~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kacy, I know this feeling... and I love these lines: Do you hear my heartbeat? Is the volume set too low? Somedays, memories are louder than music... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, reveries can be so heartaching, yet dreams are the beauty of life and to dream no more is the most heartbreaking thing of all! (sigh) Hold hope to your heart, sweet friend, for dreams are metronomes within the heart bursting to come true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Shadows, sincere thanks, for reading and replying. Duncan, yes, maybe we'll just have to endure a while longer? Nancy, yes, bittersweet. Thanks friend. Mark, thank you for letting me know your favorite line. Perhaps it's time to kick it up a notch. Vandana, smiling with a thank you. Noah, yes, the steady drone of a metronome. beat.beat.beat.beat. |
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