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I Kissed the Rain
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I Kissed the Rain |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I kissed the rain tonight, my lips dry from want, absorbing the dampness as the night settles in. I wish for you to listen to my heart as we meet in our dreams, and are reminded of these words that take me... Somewhere Into Tomorrow There is no cure for how I feel. I could follow the path of the sun, or reach for the diamonds of the night, but they would all lead me to the shape of you. For I am a dreamer, and embrace love somewhere between Heaven and Earth. If I had one more day, I'd wish to walk hand in hand, spending it in love, gathering all its moments in a bouquet to take me somewhere into tomorrow. I'd want to steal kisses, from your lips that hold back words, that could breath new life into me. I'd want to walk in your shoes and undo the doings of your past, easing your mind, your heart, your soul, allowing them to let me in and offer you my bouquet of memories. I'd want to be carried away in dreams, yours, mine, where love can endure, where distance and time no longer exist, where tears evaporate into happiness and there are no goodbyes. I touch the past, and see no todays, without the dreams of tomorrow. I loved you yesterday, love you today and dream of loving you, somewhere into tomorrow. Maureen/~Wynter "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, The most loyal woman I know! And an incredible poet with a mind for romance that will always amaze me. I'll always love your writing.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Wow. That was powerfull and beautifull. Please keep writing. Never be normal! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwwwww..you are making me blush..can you tell  thank you Larry, that is very kind of you to say  M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always your spirit sweeps me to the wind...Great Write Maureen. ThisDiamond |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Liz...you amaze me with your understanding at such a young age(it's a compliment)and I bet you have a beautiful smile... hugss M Kathleen, thank you for the time you take to respond to me. It is greatly appreciated. *s M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is what love is all about! I must save this! In my books, you've outdone yourself with this real right write! Very well done!!! EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanksM |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
I was going to say something snappy like geting a mouthful of ran, but this isn’t about the rain at all just tender emotion and dune right too |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maureen, you write some of the best emotional poetry I've ever read. I love the warm flowing conversational tone in this one especially. You reveal such great depth of love. Thank you, for your open hearted sharing of timeless devoted Love. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I hope that one day I will be able to write of my love for Gary  with words as beautiful as you have written here. I feelthe words that you write in your love poetry so very much. You have an amazing talent, dear lady. Thank you so much for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I vey much enjoyed this, thank you for sharing! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Wow... Wow.... and wow some more..... this was wonderful yours will be the first of many going into my library  dont you feel special  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't say that I relate much to this one right now, but have in the past, and maybe in the future...who knows? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a beautiful love poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I know just how you feel because when I think of Joanna I think of the rain in Florida where she lives, and dream of kissing her moist humid lips so much under the umbrella in the spring or summer! (kiss on cheek) May this ecstasy always sing in your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Our dreams of emotional wanting lead us to the loveliest places. Your words do the same. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The Crimson Knight, nope not about the rain at all Midnitesun, Thank you for your sweet comments. I enjoy expressing myself. garysgirl....it's easy just write from your heart... thank you *s M |
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