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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-11-30 05:36 PM


Grandma’s Eyes


She filled me with a love for life, in her sickness and her health
And although she was the grand, a mother’s love her truest wealth
Without a dime she taught me much, of tidily winks with buttons
Fudge that never firmed the pan, doll clothes made of paper cuttings

She took her time in ventures small, trading stamps her green and gold
And gave to me her time, most all, the walks of endless stories told
Without so much, her basic needs, relinquished for the best of all
Forgotten all too often, to the football game and lame tales stall

She left into a dark abyss when I was four that year
And fought the voices in her head, at eight to reappear
Without a sound she battled back the shame her husband said
Forever to be welcomed back, her step my smile then led

She lost me in the autumn next, again to take the shake so crazed
And reappeared like yesterday as I was wed in summer blazed
Without a doubt to cause a stir, my child was her best present
For she had come to poor extreme, her health in stealth represent

She saw with eyes that shined with joy, a strength that no one knew
And in the time we shared so dear, to know from where I drew
Without a fight she slipped from sight and seemed to still remain
For she, like me, these eyes that see, each new day comes the same

She would have smiled with eyes beguiled I saw them just today
And looking back from glass the smack of joy in the same way
Without the know, in dreams that glow, my own eyes twinkle her
For she had come to be in me, my eyes of her...as it were

Copyright Kkh 11/30/02

In the honor of my dear grandmother:
Bernice Viola Bartlett
“Beansy”  4/8/1918 - 11/27/1980  

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (11-30-2002 05:43 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-30 05:44 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Kathleen, this is such a beautiful and heartwarming tribute to your loving Bernice, sweet friend, I know with all my heart she will always be blessed to have you as her grand-daughter of love forever and ever, as you share a golden heart with her! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You Both, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-30 06:00 PM





Well you have tears rolling right down my face. This utterly touches me deeply.  It is priceless....

So many lines just leaped out at me and caused another tear, and though I did not have a grandmother's love, I am a grandmother and I don't have to say more......

I am not just saving it, I am printing it if that is okay with you.

Hugs and warm regards to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-11-30 06:25 PM


This is so beautiful! I have often heard others talk about their grandmas. But, this is a joy I never had.
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4 posted 2002-11-30 07:50 PM


TD...

you have shared with us a very touching and
real part of your life....It is surely sad
when we love someone and though they are
with us,  they are somewhere in another
world...

I have no doubt you inherited a lot from her,  and yes,  your greatest gift to her
was your first born child...

Beautiful write K.  Very touching, to say
the least...

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2002-11-30 10:24 PM




its nice that you do honor her like this, many didnt have this opportunity,

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