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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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I hear the child in me crying for affection I notice the adult that i'm becoming looking for a good talk The child tries to win from the adult The adult tries to cure the situation For as now i am sad that the conversation that i need is being overruled by a child... ~~~ Looking at an inner-mirror i see a soul breathing his last air hoping for a miracle to redraw the last lines of his history ~~~ Those two texts just popped into my mind when thinking about my current relation, and how i miss conversation in it sometimes... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I understand this. I loved the poem, and enjoyed the inlook. Never be normal! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Zenny, I understand these feelings ever so much too and I wish for nothing but heart-to-heart conversation and love to always sing to your heart! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Zenny, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
an interesting reflection of our inner dualities. good thinking. Christopher |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are many layers speaking in this, Zenny...something told me I would hear the beat of this, and it is true... and the pounding deafens... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello Zenny. I enjoyed the layered thoughts you presented and hope to read more. |
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