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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-11-30 03:27 PM



What can I give you
you can only imagine
the life I have
the love thats left to give
I can see
you standing in front of me
and I
and I wonder
when I'll a little older
a bit wiser
and nothing will become
a crazy day
when forever
starts looking like never
I will run to you
I will cry for you
but I will not let go of you

and I can only see
weakness and love in me
and I want you
to live
to love
just like me
forever
this is the story
of a life not yet lived
this day not yet walked
but oyu sometimes remember that the day will
end, before you say goodbye
your will break
the sun will shine
brightly before you
Your not alive but living here
in a world of imagination
I see you crying
I want to hug you
I see you dancing
Some one come join her today.
and I will declare
that I love you
and I will smile
and cry because without you
I might die

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-11-30 03:41 PM


This is an intriguing post, but there's some words left out so I got a little confused. Would you mind taking another look at it?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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