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A Bitter Taste
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A Bitter Taste |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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I thought I'd find comfort in revenge it doesn't suit me I've never aquired your taste for sadism |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...an important realization. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Neither does masochism from the sound of it. I have learned that in taking revenge you hurt yourself...but it does make fabulous poetry. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Revenge may taste sweet for one iota, but then it immediately becomes sour and a disease to the soul, as the villian of Othello, Iago, proves in Othello when he messes with his mind and in result causes Othello to murder his love Desdemona and make Iago seem like more of a hero! (sigh) This is incredibly wise, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, I'm really glad that "revenge doesn't suit" you. It wouldn't make you happy in the end, anyway. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Truly a hard lesson learned Mark. Thank you for the compliments Kethry, though i believe there is always a shade of masochism in a poet. Others forget their problems while we hold on and write about them. Noah what can i say, there is no sweeter heart on these pages then yours. Ethel you're right it didn't make me happy but your reply did  thanks all [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-30-2002 09:00 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh, but sometimes, revenge can be very sweet, my poet friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Of course revenge would leave a bitter taste in your mouth, dear one, because Raphael is the healing archangel! You powerfully put your point across! Well done! Earth Angel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Revenge is a bittersweet treat. Few words speaking volumes here. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
in these few lines, you've said everything i've wanted to tell the ex-gf for the past few months. thanks. mind if i print it, so's i can tack it to her door? wonderful write. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
inkedgoddess it was sweet at the beginning but I'm just not that kind of guy. thanks earth angel but I consider myself one of the fallen, in desperate need of healing. thank you midnite or maybe i was just to lazy to write a longer poem? lol Ethan if it'll do you good or win her back go ahead. thanks for the compliment |
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