»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
The End
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
The End |
|
|
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
|
~ By Sue ~ You turned my world all upside down Then you have some kind of crazy notion You and I could still ~ just be friends Where do you get all those expectations After all of the things you chose to do Not even giving me a second thought Giving me enough time to think That to live with you I would rather not You numb your feelings with all the drinking I think you must have lost your head as well With all of these crazy notions you seem to have That you and I could be friends ~ still Once I am able to finally leave this place There will be no desires inside of me To ever see you anymore at all Because from you I will finally be set free So do not hold onto the thought you have That you and I could ever be just friends After all of the things I have had to go through It is now my decision to make it ~ The End 11-30-02 |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WOW! Talk about regaining your personal power! --strong and steady! Sue, keep sharing with us--we'll be there for you! ~ smiles from across the miles!!! Linda |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Applause! Excellent write...when the heart takes control...the mind becomes clear. Much Happiness...ThisDiamond |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Good write, enjoyed the read. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
strength comes eventually...much pride in this write |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
never say never...I thought the same until it ate away at me and made me sick...eventually you will get over the anger..it's all part of the stages...denial, hurt, anger, tears, etc... hugssssss M |
||
|
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Sue ~~ Look at you now! You have become one tough cookie and I am so gosh darn proud of you. Way to go. Whatever the outcome, you are now stronger and much more self-assured. And that's so important. Hugs, Marti |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Sue, we are all sooooo proud of you, sweet friend, it takes so much courage to break out of something as deep as that and while my heart cries out to your sacrifice, I know you will find true happiness soon! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
