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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-29 11:13 PM


First Time

She softly brushed her long black hair and I was
privileged to sit there and watch every stroke.
Through vanity mirror I looked into her eyes
until I was thoroughly mesmorized by the
fullness of her luscious lips.
I began to stare and she didn't care
for she wanted all of my hard attention.
If I moved any closer we would be breathing
the same air in esctasy and that would be
perfectly alright with her and with me.
For I had been waiting here for a long time
waiting until she finished brushing her hair
to kiss her lips to make her mine.
I figured tonight was as good a time as ever.
This will not be our first kiss but tonight
will be the first time we spend a night together.

JamesLee
November28
2002



[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-29-2002 11:15 PM).]

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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-11-29 11:15 PM


I love intense moments. sigh...

Lovely write enjoyable read James.

neveah5
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since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
Ohio
2 posted 2002-11-29 11:17 PM


I remember feeling like that..quite a rush
i miss that a lot

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2002-11-30 12:47 PM


James, a very touching and romantic moment you
have written of here. I enjoyed it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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