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Is It OK
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Is It OK |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
My God This is so unreal... Life altering Never again will life be the same Why does it feel like I'm resenting this? That just can't be ok.. to resent something (someone) so innocent someone that you've never met, yet is so very close to you.. a part of you. Almost feels like regret.. missing all these things I wanted to do things I've never done before that I may never do now a loss of freedom, selfishness, carelessness. But this helpless little me keeps growing and is comming whether I'm ready or not So I search for the excitement and suprise... I find it there Someone to make me smile everyday Little hands to hold little feet to tickle finally the right to brag and no matter how lonely I may get I'll always have her to love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes love her...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
neveah, this is wonderful! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
I find it there Someone to make me smile everyday Little hands to hold little feet to tickle finally the right to brag and no matter how lonely I may get I'll always have her to love ********************* This is really great.. This is the most part I love... Waiting to read more from you.. Hugessss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so sweet. I could feel the love you are feeling. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. ~hugs~  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Neveah, This is terrific...you captured many of my thoughts when I pregnant with my first-born and thereafter....a love that is beyond compare....and then comes the time when ~she~ goes through it and then comes the ~frosting on the cake~, those wonderful grandchildren I enjoyed your writing and look forward to more. Thanks for this. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes, it is OK! --your feelings, sentiments, and this gem of a poem! ~ love and blessings to you both! Earth Angel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this echos deep within, because i find that my children are the only ones i could truly unconditionally love |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous dedication of love to your daughter, sweet friend, you have a true golden heart and I know she will always be happy to have you as a loving mom! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heather, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful substance in these words... All blessings to you both. ThisDiamond |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I can feel deep emotion in this. It was very poewerfull. You are genuine Never be normal! |
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