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Greeneyes
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0 posted 11-29-2002 03:27 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

Of human longing:
to        rhythms of snow

'But' you asked for a story with happy ending
Your loneliness        plays my tears

I sat on the floor-- gazing at your  lips:

"Watch the light whisper
to broken glass"     to memories
         of you

{softly lingering}

In my dreams:
  trees are moving
playing in rain
between heaven & earth
covering meadows in silk

{let me sleep, let me dream, let me
          be with you}


I rise to the edge of water
        it touches my hands--
draws me deeper    in
gold and green  ripples

if you could feel me

the tense quiet
           surrounds you, in
shadows    where I have been --
where I am now

The wood has settled,
the press of leaves begins   the ritual
etched in autumn light--

Where the dove mourns--
begins again the dream

no one can enter



Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-29-2002 03:36 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-29-2002 04:13 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

But I believe someone did enter....and
stands in the shadow beside you...

Lovely words Lauren,  your delicate touch is
nice to read...
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Lauren,
I think Magnus is right! Wonderful write and how nice to see you here. Miss ya' a lot.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 11-29-2002 06:15 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Exquisite sweetie...love this.
Therefore into my 'Lauren' folder it goes..
May we have more...pleeeease?!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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Fully beautiful my friend. ThisDiamond
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(big hugggssssssss) Oh Lauren, this is soooooooo gorgeous but yet feels so sad, I have missed your beautiful words so much and hope everything is alright! (kiss on cheek) I send bluebird happy hugs to you, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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*sighing*

You write in the most lovely way.
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Lauren, this is so beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing
your wonderful poetry with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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'your loneliness plays my tears'

oh - that aches. very well penned, i LOVE this line... well, of course i like all of them, but as you once said in reverse: i am biased.  

[This message has been edited by Christopher (11-30-2002 07:27 PM).]

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Thank you all....the days are short, much too short....I appreciate you all taking time to come by and reply...


Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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This one bears repeating.
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