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MidnightSkyeBlue
Junior Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 14

0 posted 2002-11-29 02:49 PM

Always constantly
Falling, tripping
On this shoelace
That always seems to unravel
Just as I'm about to
Follow my feelings
Lead on continously
By dreams and shadows
Tripping down this endless spiral
Of hopes of despair
To find myself only
Brought back to reality
By a pair of realistic memories
Slapped in the face one more time
I find my soul face first
On the cold harsh ground
Of reality
I'm always constantly
Falling, tripping
On this shoelace
Bringing me back
Forcing me to the cement
Crying longing to finally
Feel something real
Tired of being disillusioned
Only to find myself
Tripping again
On this shoelace
That seems to continously unravel..

[This message has been edited by MidnightSkyeBlue (11-29-2002 02:50 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-29 02:50 PM

You have a way with titles, don't you? Welcome to Passions! I'm going to enjoy watching your writing. Please, check yourE-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

2 posted 2002-11-29 03:21 PM

hey skye blu,
i loved ur piece.i trip also,on reality.i dream a lot day and nite and i'm constantly brought back to face reality which i dont reallylike if u know what i mean.i feel u boo.very much.

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-29 03:23 PM

The concrete of reality and shoelace of realization!
I like that!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

quik
Member

since 2002-11-27

Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

4 posted 2002-11-29 03:54 PM

I LOVE YOUR POEM. KEEP IT UP AND I READ SOME OF THE OTHERS AND THEIR GOOD AS WELL, THANX AND KEEP IT UP. i REALLY APPRECIATE THE COMMENTS AND SPREAD THE NEWS PLEASE. THANX

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-11-29 04:11 PM

Midnight SkyeBlue,
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY
I hope that you like it here. I think you will.
I enjoyed this poem and hope to read more of your poetry.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-29 08:33 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is a sad but powerfully written debut, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and hope soon the shoelaces can be double-knotted and fastened with loves care! This is excellent, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!