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Aenimal
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0 posted 2002-11-28 11:56 PM


The teeth of enmity
leave me torn and
strewn like carrion
upon a field of failed love
While the looming shadows
of loneliness,despair
and self-doubt
circle high above
(the other side of love)

there i posted it Ed

Raph

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-29-2002 12:01 AM).]

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-11-29 12:37 PM


And? You threw this away?

Glad that you dug it out of the dustbin.

Ed

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-29 01:05 AM


Raphael, I'm glad that you didn't leave this thrown away. I'm really glad that you posted it. it is very good. Thank you for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-11-30 11:49 AM



Aenimal~
I've read this about 5 times now.  It just keeps
calling me to read it again, and that's a good thing.
A well written piece and I enjoyed.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-11-30 11:51 AM



...the other side of love...

I must remember this...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2002-11-30 01:50 PM



Is your dustbin full? Maybe it's time to dump a few more like this onto the blue pages?

Aenimal
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6 posted 2002-11-30 01:54 PM


Many thanks but I think you're all too kind.
Jamie Dawg
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7 posted 2002-11-30 01:54 PM


wow. i love the feeling in this. passion and more passion! very cathartic.

Respect JD xx

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-11-30 07:11 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Raphael, this is wonderful, I'm so glad you didn't dispose of this gem as this truly is wonderful! Sometimes I dispose of some of my poems but always have something up my sleeve, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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9 posted 2002-11-30 09:02 PM


Much respect JD and thank you Noah as always for the kind words.
Ethan Halo
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10 posted 2002-12-01 02:21 AM


that's exactly how i picture enmity...
thanks for not trashin this.
it's dark.
i like it.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2002-12-01 02:41 AM


Gut-wrenching but with a bit of genius thrown in for good measure!

Excellent!

EA

inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2002-12-01 09:10 PM


yes, its feels like this,some days, anyhow  -
love hurts, then you die...........

Aenimal
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13 posted 2002-12-01 10:19 PM


Glad you like it Ethan Halo

Linda, genius? If there truly is a fine line between genius and insanity then meeting me you'd agree its the latter. lol

inkedgoddess it's not all bad though is it? No really is it? I can't remember..


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