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gemjop
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0 posted 2002-11-28 06:39 PM



Yellow new light
purer than white
shadows retreat
make room for defeat.
you catch every corner
millimetres of caress
nobody can hide
ultimate progress.
every dawn silken day
regardless of cloud
illuminates my mind
in God i am proud.


learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (11-28-2002 06:43 PM).]

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Radrook
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1 posted 2002-11-28 08:42 PM



We must keep the faith!
I liked this poem!
Thanks for sharing!
God Bless!

Christopher
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2 posted 2002-11-28 08:44 PM


we can but try to achieve a higher state
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-28 08:48 PM




(smiles) Oh Gemma, I just love this, sweet friend, God Bless You and may the light always fill a smile in your golden heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-11-28 08:52 PM


This is a sweet little poem...thanks for sharing it..


Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-11-28 09:04 PM


Gemma~
A lovely lilting read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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