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SeanD Junior Member
since 2002-11-02
Posts 12 |
I was away for a while (lots of problems) but im back. heres my returning peice short and sweet - directly to the point. What would you do, If when she smiled, Your eyes locked in her's? What would you do, If when she turned her head, There was nothing more appealing to you? What would you do, If her quiet giggle, Opened up a world of joy? What would you do, If she noticed you? [This message has been edited by SeanD (11-28-2002 08:04 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Easy...you just answer her and make her feel special too! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're back, HAPPY THANSGIVING, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Lovely write. Thanks for sharing.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Sean - enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hope your problems are behind you now! You were right! This poem is short--and very sweet! Earth Angel |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
questions i'm sure we've all wondered. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you're back |
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