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Dream Dance |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Dream Dance I watched him as he slept dancing on his dreams my hand on rise and fall of breath and looked into the face of forever I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Forever is relative to the timeline of memory... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Wow! The world seems full of lovers! Excellently written. Enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen!!! I love this! ...and I'm keeping it!!  ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiufl, sweet friend, I love the motion of this, you always write so majestically, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Oh, this was so touching. It's a wonderful poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Helen!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
this is perfect.... : ) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oooh, lovely, soothing Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ooooh this made me tingle! very special. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
NOW....this is the way it is supposed to be. Very nicely done Helen.... |
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