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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-11-28 12:46 PM



Heartstrings Vibrate

Once upon harmony
Each note we knew
Heart to heart words
Two soulmates grew

Words for the songs
Notes followed flow
He strums his guitar
True love we bestow

The noted renditions
Attuned in harmony
I wrote sky dreams
With soulmates key

Heartstrings vibrate
On soulmate songs
With words tenderly
Rolling from tongues

Danced with desire
In soulmate delight
We become music
With reason to write


Hope©2002

© Copyright 2002 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-11-28 01:03 PM


HopeS
Wonderful write, have a happy holiday.

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-11-28 01:08 PM



Although
we do not have a holiday here in Australia , I think it is only over there that Thanksgiving is celebrated
But I do "Thank You kindly for your sweet replies
Hope

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3 posted 2002-11-28 09:20 PM


Hope~
This is just lovely ... so nice to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Miah
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4 posted 2002-11-28 09:22 PM


very enjoyable read.  
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5 posted 2002-11-28 09:23 PM


We become music
With reason to write

Hope, this is simply lovely. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2002-11-28 09:24 PM




(smiles) And may you always coo loves eternal melodies together. sweet friend, this is gorgeous, I know this feeling as I love to play guitar too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kristine
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7 posted 2002-11-30 05:23 AM


Awesome! I love it!
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