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To Home In Her Hands
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To Home In Her Hands |
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Alpha_Omega Junior Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 23 |
To Home In Her Hands Tear, into the patterns Tear, into the open sky Hide, so far away in the moon Fall, so deep into a hole My venus in the depths of night Alas the fortune is told For too long, I have felt The spells of cold december dusk In the depths of her embrace The colour of aqua in the deep Hearts, in the bed of roses So seep back into the undertow Create, a new life is born Torn, apart from the womb As far to the desolence Voyage into her deception To the past, where the aura is born Remeberance in the autumn Reach for the frail farewell Beyond any reaches of infinity The numbness in her soul Silver streaks cross the disillusioned To home in her hands Ashley, this is for you... [This message has been edited by Alpha_Omega (11-28-2002 06:41 AM).] |
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Alpha_Omega Junior Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 23 |
Any criticism? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Greetings...this is the first of your work I have read. It is an intense and unique style, very visual and very deep. Enjoyed the read. ThisDiamond |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Intriguing words, iced with a sense of mysterious. Especially enjoyed, "For too long, I have felt The spells of cold december dusk" your imagery speaks volumes--enjoyed! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so beautifully heartfelt, I know Ashley will be deeply touched reading this as there will always be a silver lining in every gray parcel of sky as His love is always there! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-28-2002 09:28 PM).] |
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